We showed the second draft to a few clasmates and teachers to see what they thought. Here are some of the responses we got.
" I don't understand? Who is she and why is she in a wood?"
" Where did the guitar come from?"
" Is she upset, or thinking?"
" Where is the link between the lyrics and the clips?"
" There are too many nature clips, they all need cutting down"
After receieveing this positive feedback, we decided it was neccersary to go out and film some more footage. As we needed more narrative structure and interweaving storylines to involve the audience more. So we organised another filming day and got to work planning our shots.
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